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Monday 11 April 2016

Descriptive Writing

Paradise
The most amazing beautiful place is Paradise.The clear blue beach and the sparkling white was shiny.A perfect view of the beach and a giant beautiful tree of Mango,Bananas and many fruits.When swimming in the beach, you can see beautiful fishes like clown fish and parrot fish.All fishes are wonderful colours like bright blue,yellow,pink and amazing starfish.

When walking by the beach at night you can see the most beautiful place you've ever been.Waters are sparkling like sunshine into your face.When walking to the waterfall, you could see flying fishes and many other kinds of species.When you hop in it feels like many baby fishes are kissing your toes that will feel smooth.After a wonderful day when you go to bed you will still thing about going to the same place.
Jungle
As the sun rises up, It awakes the jungle slowly and quickly.Soon I could hear the morning birds chirp with all their hearts and that joy and excitement in my soul.A morning breeze toured the jungle making the flowers and leaves tango with rhythms and skills as though they were experts.The rich evergreen trees stood so hard as if the roots were clinging for their life.

In the distance their was a crystal river and a waterfall as it experts.I could hear the uplift river after the dive of the waterfall with slowly transformed into a swift river forcefully turning at every bank.The lions of the jungle roared to call their existence after their cool an peaceful slumber party.

1 comments:

Danni Stone said...

I love the descriptive language you have used in your writing Angelica! It was great to see you using the senses to give the reader a full picture of what the jungle and paradise would be like.

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